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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writing Challenge 9/12

    Wonderful. Just plain wonderful.

    Oct 24, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Writing challenge 10/17 "Momentary"

    Em, I don't really understand this very well. Em, good work, though.

    Oct 22, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: First Snow

    Nice! I guess the other posters have said everything I wanted to say when I read this poem...

    Oct 20, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Untitled

    Wonderful poem. This is full of love and emotion, and I really like it. Good work!

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Act II, Scene I: Enter Character

    Wow, this is great. I really like it. Good work!

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Boy Who Cried Love

    I love this poem. Wonderful, truly. I swar this could get published in a fancy magazine. Good work!

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: TheNunISTRANGLED WITH MY BARE HANDS(I'LLKILLYOUIFYOUREADTHIS

    Weird poem. Didn't sound or look much like a poem either. I agree with Racewind.

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unconditional Morphine Rant

    Haha...I LOVE YOU TOO! You're welcome.

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 666 Feet Under (Based On Real Events)

    We are always the hardest on ourselves...

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 666 Feet Under (Based On Real Events)

    Wow, this had great feeling, and I really like the way you chose your words, repeating things. Good write, I really like this poem.

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: 666 Feet Under (Based On Real Events)

    Wow, this had great feeling, and I really like the way you chose your words, repeating things. Godd write, I really like this poem.

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dreaming Of Slumber

    Thank you, Rivergirl.

    Oct 17, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Mythical Moon

    I like it, though half the time I didn't understand it. Good descriptions...

    Oct 16, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Little Ditty

    Wow, this a great poem. You can edit it a bit, but its great how it is. Good work!

    Oct 15, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dreaming Of Slumber

    Thank you all for your comments, especially Writersdomain, you helped me out alot. My edited second version: Quiet daydreams and distant memories Whisk my heart in light so sweet. Take ...

    Oct 15, 2005


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